tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18020431.post5665371285284772764..comments2024-02-17T12:35:51.512+11:00Comments on BLUEPEPPER: New Poetry by David LumsdenJustin Lowehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12663437269668973076noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18020431.post-64495259933493210412008-10-16T10:10:00.000+11:002008-10-16T10:10:00.000+11:00Hi David, I really like the way this poem creates ...Hi David, I really like the way this poem creates a vivid picture with such short stanzas, and the ending is fantastic<BR/><BR/>and here with<BR/><BR/>"over murky tea in glasses sticky to the touch,<BR/>we gaze out at The White Mountains<BR/>as though this high valley were a prison"<BR/><BR/>is such a clever juxtoposition - mountains / prison / valley where usually nature is linked to freedom and openess<BR/><BR/>Ashleymountain-ashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03913913919862931843noreply@blogger.com