Villanelle
on reading 'One Art', 'Mad Girl's Love Song',
and 'Do not go gentle into that good night'
So, how to start? Like Bishop,
Plath, or Thomas,
arguing the colon, fidgeting
with parentheses,
shadowing decasyllabics? This
is a song
(of neither loss, nor madness,
nor death)
of the bird returning to whit
the song itself. So,
so, how to start? Like Bishop,
Plath, or Thomas,
summoning that wonderland,
projecting megalo-
mania, blowing unstoppable
bottles of whisky,
shadowing decasyllabics? This
is a song
of the bird returning to whit
the song itself,
of repudiating cities, moon and anger.
So, how to start? Like Bishop?
Plath? Or Thomas?
Hell no! Discard the cells’ nostalgia! Constrict
the GOD-delusions! Clarify the Scotch and
the
shadowing decasyllabics! This
is a song
of the bird returning to whit
the song itself. Oh!
but the white-eyed bird’s
forgotten what to whit!
so, how to start? Like Bishop?
Plath? Or Thomas,
shadowing decasyllabics? This
is a song
- Stuart Barnes 2012
Stuart Barnes is slowly arranging the
manuscript for his first book of poetry, and writing his first novel. He lives
in Melbourne.
Your spinning vigour, which to dissect later or not (I will), is enough.
ReplyDeleteI really envy you. I wish I could write poetry with the same sensitivity and depth of knowledge. I admire the the passion behind all your attempts.
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for my ramblings and comment on what you think. Am adding this blog to my reading list. Thanks again :)
Yours Joblessly,
The Jobless Ideator
(I will send you an invite from the blog-facebook page. Am the same person as Priestess! )
thank you, undersized shadow & jobless ideator! shall reply in more detail via farcebook :D
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