Rich, Adrienne, Tonight no Poetry Will Serve (New York : W.
W.
Norton, 2011) ISBN 9780393342789 $15.95 US.
Tonight no
Poetry Will Serve is the last book of poetry by Adrienne Rich that
was published in her lifetime. As a result, it is easily read as the
culmination of her long and fruitful career as a poet. Yet leaving aside
questions of whether it can truly be the summation of her career (for which a
collected edition of all her poems is the true measure), it can be asked, not
whether the poems are worth reading, but what are the strengths and the
weaknesses of the poems. In my opinion, there are far more strengths than
weaknesses. And that these strengths are of form, language, technique, among
others, that they are evidence of the skill and voice of the poet
herself.
There are a number of strengths displayed by the poems of Tonight no Poetry Will Serve. Among these are an
imaginitive use of white space, the avoidance of too much punctuation (which
throws the range of interpretations back onto the poems' performance), and an
assurance of voice that is testament to the poet's confidence and skill. This
is not even to venture into the language, or the poems'
techniques.
The language of Tonight no Poetry Will
Serve is strong and sinewy. In saying that, it does not mean that
the idiolect does not change according to need and situation. It does. And
the language ranges from the effacing “Saw you walking barefoot” of the title
poem, to the more clotted “Princes of predation let me tell you” and other
lines of “The Ballade of the Poverties”. This is a mark of the breadth of the
poet's vision.
The range of techniques is consonant with the poet's skill
and place in contemporary poetry. I need not note the assurance of the free
verse and prose poetry, each, not unique, but consonant with the poem in
question. The use, also, of the pauses of the lines' ending helps score and
mark the poems' meaning and gravity. Read aloud the following strophe from
the title poem, and you'll hear this: “Tonight I think / no poetry /
will serve” – there is a real weight here.
There is one obvious flaw
to Tonight no Poetry Will Serve. The sole use of a fixed
form as the basis of a free verse poem fails; the ballade of “Ballade of the
Poverties” does maintain the repetend to a point, as well as keep the four
line envoi with its obligatory address, but the failure to maintain the basic
length and number of the preceding stanzas does break the poem's back, and it
does diminish its impact. The other poems, freed from this need to work
within the strengths and limitations of a fixed form work far
better.
I repeat my opinion: there are far more strengths than weaknesses
in the poems of Tonight no Poetry Will Serve. This is
evident through the strengths I have mentioned, such as the use of technique,
and the language involved. And it is to be expected that there will be some
flaws, with the only real problem I had with the poems in the misprision of
the form of the ballade. And I could add, at this late stage, further
remarks, such as mentioning the clarity of the poems' insights into our
contemporary world, or how the fractures of the poems' narratives open up
possibilities of breaking apart the mundane fictions which we create to
approach the world. But I will, rather, end on this note: the poems of Tonight no Poetry Will Serve work, not just because they
speak through their subjects, but also because they work wonderfully on their
own, technical terms.
- Phillip Ellis 2013
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